Monday, January 11, 2010

An attempt


My first snow in 2010

Snowy Friday noon
Icicles on empty boughs
White pin drop silence

Times Square all by myself

Dazzling bright ad world
Solitary monologues
Alone with coffee

68th Street, Lex Av

Presbyterian crowd
The 6 train lurches forward
Grimy grayish rails

Southern Avenue

Sunshine through green sieves
Dahi Phuchka by VP
Yellow cabs zoom past

Gariahat market

Colorful wares 'round
Constant gay cacophony
Lost for words am I

5 comments:

Crossworder said...

Some very pretty poetry there...beautifully evocative :)

Love
Crossworder

Platinum Carbide said...

thankoo :)

Platinum Carbide said...

Platinum,

Try to catch the symbolic 3-5-3 (haiku) in the photograph...

Carbide

Manojit Choudhury said...
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Manojit Choudhury said...

oof 'figments of imagination' stuff right there...anuda u shud have also added park street, kolkata...suvendu's bhanga bag, pt's cheese covered dish and mind -boggling GPA scores, my dull patties and your xxx bengali kobita narration...overall, an evening to remember